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[Ollie & Scoops Episode 6: Old Crumplecranks]

This is a full on production...damn...
This is the kind of thing I would love to work on
The voice work, the old and new animation tricks, the look...even the gags that have whiskers on them are still part of its charm.
I hope you have it out a few film festivals (although social distancing has kiboshed some of those).
Other than that I think Synikal covered it.
Anyway I am off to take a look at your Patreon page.
Great work.

[Not a Movie Date]

I liked it. Even the disaffected voice is akin to say Harvey Pekar or a Robert Crumb kind of thing. It reminded me of some of the animation work done in the documentary Comic Book Confidential by Ron Mann.

[Today I'm gonna cross the road !]

Some fun stuff there but the credits and extra shots just pad and stretch it out. Editing needs to be used as your best friend. Be concise and don't extend things to meet a "length of time". This could be 30 seconds long and would play a lot funnier due to the speed. But for a first collaboration it's a good start

GoldSynapses responds:

thanks for your feedback UniDublin we will keep that in mind :)